This is the finished product. While I was doing it, it was a little bit of fun and it was also kind of hard.
I really enjoyed writing it. It took me a while to get the hang of it and get it on my blog.
Did you enjoy reading my blog post?
Thursday, April 16, 2020
my parents story
This is the finished product. While I was doing it, it was a little bit of fun and it was also kind of hard.
I really enjoyed writing it. It took me a while to get the hang of it and get it on my blog.
Did you enjoy reading my blog post?
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Hi Aliah. My name is Lucy and I am a student at marshland school.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good piece of writing, very interesting.
I absolutely loved your post.
Maybe next time you could include your grandma or your grandad.
Did your mum and dad actually have a dog when they were little?
Yes they did Lucy.
DeleteHi Aliah,
ReplyDeleteWhat a gorgeous dog! I bet Choc loved going for lots of walks. Do your parents still have a dog now?
My mum and dad still do have a dog now.
DeleteWhat a lovely story Aliah. I'm pleased you enjoyed writing it, it must have been fun to have your parents in your story. Next time I would love to read some more descriptive words in your writing because I know you have lots of impressive words that you know!
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