Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
The best version of myself.
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Hey Aliah its Makenzie I just wanted to say that your work is super interesting and well presented. Maybe next time you can use less bright colours or less variety then it would be a little easier to read. In Toroa we did something a little different we did a Lego person drawing theat represented ourselves throug what we would think if you want you can see it on my blog https://marmakenzie.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteThanks Makenzie that was a really well presented comment. I really appreciate it. Thanks.
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