Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 11, 2020
volcanoes presentation
Kia Ora bloggers, Aliah here. A little while ago I did a presentation on volcanoes as a piece of my work. For me it was really fun. It took me a while to get this done but I am still working on the last slide. Do you like my presentation? I would not mind if you gave me any feedback. Goodbye for now bloggers. Blog yu later.
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Kia Ora, Aliah. My name is Farhad and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like this presentation you did about volcanoes. This reminds me of when I did a volcano presentation a very long time ago. Maybe next time you could add more information about volcanoes. I hope you have a good day / night. Blog ya later!
ReplyDeleteThanks Farhad. Next time I will try to add more information
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